Survivors
Cornell University,
Ithaca, NY
First day of spring
break and the grounds
crew is out in
throngs scraping death
into little piles
from under
campus shrubs
and into plastic bags
two students jumped
from suspension bridge
last week,
Engineers,
and now
they're installing
fences on
the bridges
that span gorges,
tall, metal-mesh barriers,
like those hastily constructed
for prisoner of war camps,
to keep nature from seducing
stressed students
to its waterfall pools,
and black rocks,
administrator-approved
containment of all learning
in the brick and mortar,
sad reminders
of World Trade
Center jumpers,
the women locked
in Triangle Shirt Factory
fire, fashionably black
Victorian boots
on high narrow ledges, toe-ing the emptiness,
the place
we all reach
when pushed.
Tuesday, March 30, 2010
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Hey Eric, nice work! I didn't understand why "survivors" initially but now understand after the chat with you.
ReplyDeleteI still don't get the first stanza - what is the 'death' that the crewmen are picking up from the campus shrubs? Bodies of the dead students? Leaves/petals from plants (seems a bit too late for leaves and too early for petals)?
I like the transition in 2nd stanza - Engineers, and now they're installing... how Engineers allude to the two students' major and also the people installing the fences.
I found the descriptions "prisoner of war camps" and "world trade center jumpers" controversial. POWs bring to my mind people in custody during war-times, often from enemy camps... I don't feel that the fences on campus serve a similar purpose? While I can agree to the similarity between the WTC jumpers being forced out by smoke/fire and the students being forced to jump by certain pressure (academic work, social pressures), I think the WTC jumpers are victims of terrorism with no choice, while the students have a choice.
I enjoyed your ending, a sober reminder of the extremes human mind can go under stress; but it seemed somewhat depressing, I was hoping for a more cheerful resolution given the theme "survivors".